Just like a little kid, that Hiyori! *is shot slippered*
It might be interesting to read Hiyori in a longer fic -- your series of hours already shows character development, but what about the bits in between that a challenge series like this is entitled to skip? =P
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Date: 2008-06-10 11:10 pm (UTC)shotslippered*It might be interesting to read Hiyori in a longer fic -- your series of hours already shows character development, but what about the bits in between that a challenge series like this is entitled to skip? =P