Oh this is nice-- I love your definition of middle-class in SS! And it's just about par with what a rather perceptive 14 year old boy might think! Not that I remember myself what it was like to be 14, much less a boy.
I have a question-- is this fic older Shinji looking back on his friendship with Hiyori, or 14-year-old Shinji experiencing his first reaction to seeing Hiyori? I'm asking because I mostly feel it's 14 year old Shinji, but the last sentence of para 3 threw me off a little. *Embarrassed at my forwardness grimace*
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Date: 2008-06-02 01:33 am (UTC)Not that I remember myself what it was like to be 14, much less a boy.I have a question-- is this fic older Shinji looking back on his friendship with Hiyori, or 14-year-old Shinji experiencing his first reaction to seeing Hiyori? I'm asking because I mostly feel it's 14 year old Shinji, but the last sentence of para 3 threw me off a little. *Embarrassed at my forwardness grimace*
Enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!